The skin crawls,
The heart races.
Breath coming in short gasps
The desire to depart
Becoming a fever
That burns both eyes,
Tears escaping
Casting trails down her face.
The one upon whom she bestowed
So much trust,
The one she had uttered her committment to
Countless times,
Forever embellishing the emotional
Interludes
They shared so many times together.
Unbelievably her eyes scan
The news item lying in front of her.
Her mind travelling back
Remembering those precious memories
That have yet to fade
From her mind.
She can still feel his hands upon her,
She can see the warmth in his eyes.
She can still recall the tremors in her body
That he had created as they shared
Intimate moments.
Deception,
Unknowingly a victim
Yet not like the one she has just discovered
As her unbelieving eyes
Have yet to convince her
That what she has read is true.
The words she has read,
His picture she has seen
Like countless thousands have done
Repetitively today,
The thoughts of only the perpetrator
And not of the young victim.
A stifled cry, muffled yet audible
Escaping from her lips
As the reality of this tragedy
Lies naked in print before her.
Disbelief becoming confusion,
As confusion becomes anger
And the memory of those promises
Discovering the emptiness
Of her heart.
The bastard!
2 comments:
Ohhhhh chilling and along my style of writing!
I LOVE this one
it makes you think and gets your mind and emotions spinning.
VERY good hun.....
I have been spending hours on editing in prep for a book preposal... its sooo hard to edit.. i know why i never did it..lol..... i am posting the redone ones in parts 1- however long it will take...lol.. i do hope you will re read my works and let me know honest opinions.. better before? or good now? any changes?? THANKS
And PLEASE do write more like this one.. its stirring!!!
Wrote this one, Autumn, sick as a dog. It's amazing how sometimes words still seem to flow even when you're spending most of your day puking your guts up...kind of graphic, but yeah, that's what I was doing, and something I saw on the tv brought this to mind. Glad you enjoyed it. Guess I need to get sick more often, huh? Ha Ha!
Charlie
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